OMG Lucy!!!! What a story!!! Your writing is improving greatly you are becoming a very talented, descriptive writer who has an ability to tell your story in such a way that holds your audience. The plot line of the story wasn't very nice though, (you know how I don't like scary things, lol.) At the end when you got a pain in your back and watched your mum and dad walk away as you fade to nothing; made me cry. Excellent story writing Lucy.
OMG Lucy!!!! What a story!!! Your writing is improving greatly you are becoming a very talented, descriptive writer who has an ability to tell your story in such a way that holds your audience.
ReplyDeleteThe plot line of the story wasn't very nice though, (you know how I don't like scary things, lol.) At the end when you got a pain in your back and watched your mum and dad walk away as you fade to nothing; made me cry. Excellent story writing Lucy.