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Persuasive Speech

Last term Ruma J wrote persuasive speeches, Then we had to present them to our class mates. The feedback that my class people gave back to me said that I spoke confidently with a clear voice. Something that I found challenging was presenting at assembly because there was a noisy baby in the audience.

Quick write LF

I was walking down the hall when I heard a voice scream my name

( Elizabeth?)

I turned my back and I saw nothing but a long dark hall, I started to walk down the hall thinking there was someone there and when I reached the end I saw a Little girl leaning against the door at the end of the hall the door slowly started to creak open but the girl just stood there. The door opened and the cleaner just walked straight through her. I walked away hoping she wouldn't notice

(Where are you going?) The little girl asked me

(Home) I Replied

(You can see me!?) The girl said surprised (Umm… Yeah) I said wondering what she meant

(Do you know who I am?)

(No)

I saw a old lady come out of the door the cleaner came out
(Maggie are you talking to humans again I told you not to do that after what happened last time)

(OK)

(Sorry I’ve got to go now) she said running to the lady

(Wait, Why can’t you talk to me?) I shouted to her and what happened last time

My HomeLinks-Persuasive Arguments

 For my homework i did persuasive arguments!

MD&LF Jurassic world trailer😺😺

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The movie called Jurassic world, Written by Colin Trevorrow, Is about two brothers Zach and Grey who go to an amusement park full of dinosaurs. The dinosaurs are kept in a zoo-like environment for visitors to look at and learn about. The two brothers Zach and Grey go to stay with their auntie Claire. Zach and Grey think their trip would be full of fun but it turns out that it’s full of fear!

This is an exciting, dangerous, & Action packed movie.

I like the movie because it is dangerous and thrilling and it makes people go on the edge of their seats and wonder if the characters are going to survive or not Like the part when they are trying to get away from the dinosaur in a car and one of the dinosaurs jump into the car but Zach punches him.

My favorite part of the movie is at the end when the two dinosaurs are Fighting for their lives then all of a sudden blue the dinosaur comes out of nowhere and tries to kill one of the dinosaurs and then mosasaurus comes out of the water and eats one of the dinosaurs because the part when blue comes out of nowhere is quite funny and the part when the mosasaurus drags the big dinosaur into the water because I think it looks fun.

Overall I think it is a good movie and I can’t wait for Colin Trevorrow to make another movie like jurassic park.

I would recommend this movie to anyone who likes action packed, dangerous, and thrilling movies.

Homework Responce

The painting being held in my house is a big mat looking art piece with a family of deer. This artwork is set in a desert looking forest with lots of rocks and not much trees.

This both a wonderful and old looking artwork.

I like how it is a family of deer not just a hind or a stag because I think it puts more life into it.

I don't like how it is very dull looking, I think it looks dull looking because of the rocks and the color of the sky and it doesn’t look like there is much grass also there is not much leaves on the trees.

I would recommend this artwork to any one who likes a old and hunting artworks

Overall I think that is a good art work but if I made it I would have made It a lot different to the artist made this one.

My Art Response The Ickneild way, Spencer Gore★

The artwork Icknield way By Spencer Gore, Is a beautiful sunset landscape made in 1912. The artwork is made out of water colors and pencil with lots of calming colors that really stand out.

This is both a wonderful and meaningful artwork.

I think it is nice how the artist put lots of geometric shapes in the sky. I think it makes it more interesting to look at.

I  like the pretty colors the artist uses all over the painting. I also like how he made the grass and the mountains pink because it’s very imaginative.

I can relate to this artwork because I live In a farmland and outside all my windows I can see a farmland landscape also, I love looking outside my bedroom window and seeing a sunset landscape

Overall I think it is a good painting and i really like it, I would definitely like to review more of Spencer Gore’s art work such as, Houghton place, The Cinder path and  Hertingfordbury,

I think that it would be good for anyone who likes nice colors and beautiful landscapes.

My story the change!

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Bottle Top Reflection

Harakeke In NZ Culture. WALT: Explanation

This Slide Show tells you about harakeke ( Flax ) It tells you what it means and why it is so important to The NZ culture.

Flora&Fauna With Mr Barnett and Henk from D.O.C

R.I.P Reflection. 

Remember And Describe what you did.

Today Ruma J went on a Bush walk with Philip Barnett and Henk Velenski.

On the walk we saw lots of different plant species. 

Identify the important part.

I think that it was very important that Mr Barnett bought Henk to visit our school to tell us about the different types of plants and I think that it was good for the class to get out of the class room.

Plan how you will use this in the future.

I think that we could use it for if you want to become a teacher you could teach kids all about the flora and fauna. 

Kiwi information report

My first blog post !!

 Hi I am Lucy I am 10 years old I go to lake brunner school I like writing and drawing I have a Pet dog And two older sisters I like Doughnuts and bacon and My favourite colour is purple.