Hi Lucy my name is Estel, your presentation looks wonderful and outstanding but you should really change the colours more bright and also the front you should try something different and make it more bigger also you should go back and check also fix your front and background. But i reckon it is perfectly fine.
Hi Estel, Thank you for commenting on my blog I listened to your feedback and Changed the Background to a much brighter hope you come back to my blog soon
I love hearing about your Scout adventures, so thanks for sharing. I think it's great you choose to write at home, this will help you get better and better! What else is planned for Scouts this term?
Kia Ora Lucy. Great presentation well done! Next time you could make the transitions faster. Did you enjoy the walk? Can you check out my blog at http://lakebrunnerbreaghw.blogspot.co.nz/ -Breagh
Hi Lucy my name is Estel, your presentation looks wonderful and outstanding but you should really change the colours more bright and also the front you should try something different and make it more bigger also you should go back and check also fix your front and background. But i reckon it is perfectly fine.
ReplyDeleteHi Estel,
DeleteThank you for commenting on my blog I listened to your feedback and Changed the Background to a much brighter hope you come back to my blog soon
I love hearing about your Scout adventures, so thanks for sharing. I think it's great you choose to write at home, this will help you get better and better! What else is planned for Scouts this term?
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Lucy.
ReplyDeleteGreat presentation well done! Next time you could make the transitions faster. Did you enjoy the walk? Can you check out my blog at http://lakebrunnerbreaghw.blogspot.co.nz/
-Breagh