Last term Ruma J wrote persuasive speeches, Then we had to present them to our class mates. The feedback that my class people gave back to me said that I spoke confidently with a clear voice. Something that I found challenging was presenting at assembly because there was a noisy baby in the audience.
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ReplyDeleteGood job. I think it was a good speech and a good topic because It is something that I think everybody doesn't really enjoy wearing. I think also that the teachers don't really understand the struggle because they get to wear what they like.
I think next time You could maybe film somewhere were there is not so much background noise. niceeeeeee
Well done Lucy! I think it was a good idea to do a speech about uniforms and you had a lot of examples and past experiences that made your speech more genuine.
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ReplyDeleteIt's Tess & Prakriti here,
We thought that your speech was well presented and well written with that great pun! Next time maybe speak a little bit louder and clearer as it was difficult to hear you well at times in your recording.
Overall well done!!
Ka Pai. I think you chose a really good topic because it's suitable for all ages. You had a really good loud and clear voice and good pun. Once again good job!
ReplyDeleteThank you all!!!
ReplyDeleteThank you all!!!
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